The Lyrical Assassins Brotherhood Poetry

Brave Enough

Life has a way of breaking us down, but the character of a person is judged by the amount of time he or she gets up.  Society believes we are not brave enough and we will fall victim to the poison they shove down our throats. We are writers, poets and dreamers and we are more then brave… We are survivors.

The purpose of this experiment is to encourage each other with our pen, our lives and our testimony. I look forward to see how YOU write this one out.

David Cardenas

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17 responses

  1. I know you wrote this on short notice, but you would have never known it. This is hot and so filled with flavor. Awesome job Leslie and thanks for hosting the LAB

    December 1, 2011 at 2:51 am

  2. MizzFab

    Thank You for letting me host 🙂

    December 1, 2011 at 3:12 am

  3. nice work

    December 1, 2011 at 4:29 am

  4. Mizz Fab, this is an amazing piece. The power that drift through out your words are simply breathtaking.

    December 2, 2011 at 7:08 pm

    • MizzFab

      ty bp 🙂

      December 2, 2011 at 11:41 pm

  5. I reached out my hand to rescue my soul
    From this scatter brain world where I had lost all control
    Drifting through life looking to exhale
    But the death of my dreams made ambitions turn pale
    Gray Skies
    Nightmares
    And broken hearts
    More Lies
    Blank stares
    Time for me to depart
    I’ve slipped into a catalyst where no human dare to enter
    Streamlining my destruction, failure deep rooted into the placenta
    Mentioned in whispers so no one remembers my name
    Show cased in a distance where all people saw was pain
    How do I regain
    My sanity, I’m insane
    And its clear and evident
    That destruction on my brain
    Screaming I am a man, and my fears made me tough
    Seems like I was really scare, I just was not brave enough

    December 2, 2011 at 7:44 pm

    • MizzFab

      love your take on the challenge ,great job bp

      December 2, 2011 at 11:42 pm

    • Wow, BP. I just love your word usage and the power behind your work. Nicely done brother. Nicely done.

      David

      December 7, 2011 at 8:27 am

  6. Reflection

    Fighting against the looks and whispers. Constant laughs and pointing form people in my path. Walking and watching them as they say things about me. through all of their perpetual mockery something inside me tells me to press on. To keep my head up and fight back. I can hear them call me insane, freak, and say that I should be locked up. Little do they know that their words of judgement make me smile and help me to continue to write the way I do. I am here to show you that your words have no affect on me. I am Sarah and no matter what I will never change. Are you spirited enough to walk through the silent stares with the satisfaction that no matter what, you are not ashamed to be who you are? How brave can you truly be?

    December 4, 2011 at 9:05 pm

  7. Nicholas Malone

    I used to be weak
    Insecure, apprehensive and unconfident
    Now I am immune
    To the torture and the nonsense
    So long ago
    I used to be afraid and scared
    Until they tossed me in the fire
    And that made me prepared
    I tried to bypass my problems
    But that never worked
    I learned to strategize my efforts
    On better ways to solve them
    I evolved into a warrior
    And I calculate my moves
    My wounds have healed
    My intellect must improve
    I am brave enough
    To speak out and against
    The stereotypical views
    That society dispense
    Movie screens and t.v. shows
    Reply the same content
    Manipulating ill minds
    Catalyzing your descent
    Trillion dollar deficit
    The congress men are crooks
    Rewriting laws in the books
    And they steal from the desperate
    If I don’t fight
    Then my future will be crippled
    The world isn’t right
    Beware of the ripples
    I know I am brave
    But will it be enough
    The war is around me
    I must remain ruff…

    December 7, 2011 at 4:32 am

    • Very powerful write Nicholas. You dug deep within yourself on this one and it shows..

      David

      December 7, 2011 at 8:26 am

    • Awesome piece Nicholas

      December 9, 2011 at 12:24 pm

  8. Brave Enough
    By David Cardenas

    He lay perfectly still, patiently waiting
    Hoping life would pass him by
    His faith and his dreams were escaping
    Oozing and he wasn’t even asking why
    See, he thought about all the times he got up
    But eventually wound up back on his face
    Was it life or his aura that left him caught up?
    Or was he destined to lay in this place?
    From the ground he heard the devil whisper
    “Don’t get up… What’s the use?
    He closed his eyes and the air became crisper
    And he mentally struggled on his next move
    Was he brave enough to get up again?
    Or was being brave, being able to admit defeat
    As he laid there, the pain began to sink in
    In anger, he begin to clinch his teeth
    He whispered back to the devil, “You lose!”
    And he slowly started to get up
    He realized there would always be an excuse
    And his fate would never be set up
    So he dusted off the dirt and began to fight
    Agonizing in pain, he began to lift his eyes
    “I do it not for the victory or to be right”
    I do it because I am brave enough to see past the lies

    December 7, 2011 at 8:24 am

    • Nicholas Malone

      So he dusted off the dirt and began to fight Agonizing in pain, he began to lift his eyes “I do it not for the victory or to be right” I do it because I am brave enough to see past the lies. Nice imagery and your words described what a lot of people go thru in their day to day lives. Good poetry.

      December 7, 2011 at 1:35 pm

      • Thank you very much Nicholas. I appreciate the love.

        David

        December 8, 2011 at 10:18 pm

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