The Lyrical Assassins Brotherhood Poetry

Forbidden Lust


We live in world of free will, but there are times when love or certain lusts are taboo. You goal on this topic is to not only write on the topic, but creative and work outside of your own box.  Challange yourself on this topic, push yourself past the writes that are easy for you.

Hamza, has been writing for the LAB since our conception. He is very versitile and can write on many different levels and so many different topics.  Please welcome Hamza with your poems, comments and support.

David Cardenas

The LAB Adminstrator


89 responses

  1. A sad situation so poetically described. The first stanza really draws the reader in and keeps the interest till the bitter end. Well done Hamza and what a wonderful presentation by David. The picture is absolutely brilliant too. A great openining write for the LAB.

    February 1, 2012 at 7:06 am

    • hamza

      thx love…u knw i live fo ur views 🙂

      February 2, 2012 at 11:39 pm

  2. Queenschan

    I just want you to fuck me
    No tender kisses..soft caresses
    Just rip off my clothes tell me how
    Bad you wanna give me some dick

    Just hearing you take charge has me wet
    No need for foreplay just bend me over and rush right in grab my hips and grind within
    Dive deeper grind harder make my teeth grit
    Make my pussy spit the flood your dick want
    To drown in
    Now turn me over
    Make my toes reach toward the sky
    Jump right in it man don’t be shy
    This is not your first time
    Make mommy proud and beat
    My pussy up now, no loving gazes
    No staring deeply into my eyes
    Just fuck me to sleep that’s all
    Which will satisfy my need to be fucked like a beast in heat
    Pull my hair tell me to take that dick
    That is what I want to hear
    I don’t wanna be your baby tonight. I wanna be the freaky bitch you fucked all night

    February 1, 2012 at 7:07 am

    • MMMMMM some like it hot, some like it rough and some like it everyehich way. Hot write Queenschan

      February 1, 2012 at 7:34 am

      • Queenschan

        Frankie I don’t know how I like it..I’m not getting it haha thank you for your eyes and time

        February 3, 2012 at 2:21 pm

    • I agree with Frankie, very hot. Hot, Hot Hoooot.


      February 1, 2012 at 7:38 am

      • Queenschan

        Hey you said push beyond so I did. Thanks for inviting me. I hope to be a part of the next scribing

        February 3, 2012 at 2:25 pm

      • Yes you did and in regards to the next… The answer is Hell yeah!!! We promote creative writing and pushing the envelope and you do just that. Thanks for coming out.

        February 3, 2012 at 3:53 pm

    • Listen Queenschan, I think i’m too young for this fiyah you just dropped in here. My ears still smoking. So Nice had to read it thrice!

      February 1, 2012 at 8:12 pm

      • Queenschan

        Lol if you’re 21 it’s ok. Thanks for your three-peat.

        February 3, 2012 at 2:19 pm

    • hamza

      thx 4 stopin by …umm brotha feelin this thang here…that forebiden lust certanly has a heavy appeal. ur pen is great. n naughty

      February 2, 2012 at 11:42 pm

      • Queenschan

        Thanks Hamza I am humbled to be noticed by someone with an exquisite pen

        February 3, 2012 at 2:17 pm

  3. Oh Hamza …. what a masterful pen on forbidden lust. i’ve read your piece front to back/back to front/ first line of each stanza then second line, etc. and it all makes sense. your ink on this topic runs deep. whew! so glad the LAB is up and running and that you are hosting. much love, dear poet.

    February 1, 2012 at 7:13 am

    • hamza

      thx babe

      February 2, 2012 at 11:42 pm

  4. Milah

    that was very good Hamzzaaa..diggin the imagery..

    February 1, 2012 at 7:30 am

    • hamza

      appreciate that…

      February 2, 2012 at 11:43 pm

  5. Hamza, you really went all out in this joint. Way to write it!!!! Very deep flow.


    February 1, 2012 at 7:42 am

    • hamza


      February 2, 2012 at 11:45 pm

  6. Queenschan

    Hamza, I felt every single emotion in that piece. I don’t know whether to grab some Kleenex or scream. I love the heartwork this painted on my eye canvas

    February 1, 2012 at 7:44 am

  7. Ive given you pieces of me…in every piece from me…
    You’ve grown tired and weary of my decency and want me to loose the beast within me…
    But my hesitation has only built upon your anticipation…while the beast grows impatient….deciding on how many different ways he can devour your deviation…
    My lips press againt the precipice that awaits between your waist…
    My tongue circumnavigates past your gates exploring every location of your devine nation…
    See, I’m tasting…tasting the very presence of you…the essence of you
    Lips like blades of grass catching the mornings due….only to have you Spring showers…and see I can spend hour upon hour devouring your Spring flower….
    But the beast longs to be sated…
    Longs for the songs you sing as you’re being penetrated….
    Walls broken and decimated…every consecrated place desecrated…
    To the point where the only way you know how many times you’ve came is to estimate it…
    Tonight your name is origami, because my mission goes far beyond missionary…
    Hope you strechted well because I’m about to make you understand why my name in this game is Visionary…
    The reason why Sealy needed Posturepedic…might well call me Michael cause I’m a ask you ”Who’s Bad” after I ”Beat It”….
    Yea a ”Smooth Criminal” commiting vaginal homicide…
    Clitoral man slaughter…only to be damn near drowned in yours waters….
    Got me swimming in it…deep strokes that sweet stroke but my breast strokes that best stroke…
    Final destination that throat, cause I know you a freak and its what ever floats your boat…
    Reveling in the most revealing story about us…this story is not about me and you though this story is about lust….

    February 1, 2012 at 9:07 am

    • Dig the piece. Your word useage got me dizzy. Nice external and internal rhyme schemes.


      February 1, 2012 at 2:37 pm

      • Thanks I try…trying to keep up with so many great writers…

        February 2, 2012 at 8:38 pm

    • Loving the rhyme scheme and this Piece Monroe.

      February 1, 2012 at 8:11 pm

      • I appreciate it thanks…

        February 2, 2012 at 8:36 pm

    • Great word choice and you paint a picture of sheer HOTNESS. Well done Monroe.

      February 1, 2012 at 11:22 pm

      • Thank you 😉

        February 2, 2012 at 8:35 pm

    • hamza


      February 2, 2012 at 11:46 pm

    • hamza


      February 5, 2012 at 5:28 am

  8. Forbidden Lust

    Acting as a voyeur, I
    Just couldn’t help but watch
    Eyes drawn to his tanned body
    It really was red hot, top notch

    Denham cut off jeans so short
    Oiled, well toned, torso’s gleam
    Landscaping garden next to mine
    Quietly watching I’d daydream

    Together and alone at last
    My fingers traced his full hot lips
    Crushing me into his chest
    His hands moulded my hips

    We didn’t introduce ourselves
    Fuelled by forbidden lust
    Our bodies did the talking
    Carnal knowledge was a must

    Tongues and lips got well acquainted
    Passions heightened to explode
    Desire sizzled from each other
    Fire and brimstone overload

    Time stood still that afternoon
    Forbidden lust devouring me
    Cut off Denham and a six pack
    All inhibitions wild, set free


    February 1, 2012 at 12:00 pm

    • Queenschan

      Hmmm well this is metaphorically hot

      February 1, 2012 at 12:57 pm

    • Yes, This is what I was talking about. I love the flow and the imagination of this one Frankie. Nicely penned.


      February 1, 2012 at 2:39 pm

      • Thanks David, and sadly…… it was all in the imagination LOL… 🙂

        February 1, 2012 at 11:25 pm

    • Amazingly hot Frankie

      February 1, 2012 at 8:10 pm

    • hamza


      February 2, 2012 at 11:47 pm

  9. Allen Simmons (Lyrical Grim Reaper)

    Forbidden Lust samples erotic formations of sex,But my heart knows no guilt, So I cover all of your sex pleasurables like a quilt/ To capture your essence, I’ll say my grace,and devour your nectar, burying my face/ Between Heaven and Hell, my Manhood swells,Inside of your Forbidden Fruit I shall dwell/ Spilling seeds of life inside your womb,Wishing to be more than just a lover for you, but instead your groom/ The Lust breeds intense feelings I refuse to hide,This more about passion, check these tears I’ve cried/ To explore the joys that happiness could bring, As I become Forbidden Lusts underling!

    February 1, 2012 at 6:13 pm

    • LOve this Allen. Glad to see you droppin that hotness in the Lab

      February 1, 2012 at 11:38 pm

      • Allen Simmons (Lyrical Grim Reaper)

        Thank you. I just wanted to.make sure what I wrote fit the topic! Respect!

        February 2, 2012 at 5:59 am

      • allen simmons

        My pleasure! I’m a huge fan of lyrical expression and rock!

        March 3, 2012 at 4:11 pm

    • You always amaze me with your versatility Allen. You can be tough as nails or soft as velvet. Loving this one.

      February 2, 2012 at 1:32 am

      • Allen Simmons (Lyrical Grim Reaper)

        Thank you my Flossy Aussie! I really admire the passion and the feelings you write into your quills. It makes me feel like I was sitting there listening to you recite your work. Awesome!

        February 2, 2012 at 6:02 am

    • First of all, I love the poem, you done did your thang there, second, I love the new name, “Lyrical Grim Reaper”. This is def you,


      February 2, 2012 at 12:06 pm

    • hamza


      February 2, 2012 at 11:49 pm

  10. Awesome piece cuzzo.

    February 1, 2012 at 7:16 pm

    • hamza

      THX I TRY

      February 2, 2012 at 11:49 pm

  11. She stood, hidden within the dark shadows of the room.
    Light never intertwining with her flesh, there was something about her, A gloom.
    What ever it was it seized my undivided attention
    I was caught in the web of her eyes, entranced by her spell.
    Yet she never said a word, not a sound was uttered.
    She just stood there, I stared and she stared back, a stalemate.
    Then she made a gesture for me to approach.
    I was scared and shocked but the proposition was too tempting,
    Her mysterious essence called to me, the darkness beaconed me
    So I approached, slowly. As I got closer the aura became colder.
    A chill, traversed my spine, I began to shiver in fear
    But I could not stop the advance, I had to know who or what was calling to me
    I entered the dark region of the room where she stood
    An inhaled her scent, AHHHHHHH,
    It was as tantalizing as a field of black roses,
    Her skin, pale as the desolate moon light, yet still so beautiful
    She said kiss me………..
    I slowly caressed the contours her neck with my tongue,
    Journeying over the valleys of her chin until my lips met hers,
    This was so absurd, but commanding
    As I kissed her, her hands massaged my thighs inching higher and high
    The intimate connection created and instant erection
    She smiled and bit my lip, until it bled.
    I could see the excitement in her eyes as the blood slowly seeped from my wound
    She began to suck on the wound with an intense passion,
    While continuously stroking on my manhood.
    Her skin was cold as ice, but a fire between us was blistering.
    We slipped deeper and deeper into the darkness, where our dark lust grew.
    Her eyes illuminated red and I knew from that, I may never return from this escapade
    But it felt as if I belong, and I no longer had the fear of what was to come
    This darkness had become my home, the place where I belong
    And the women, the demon, had become my mistress…. A dark lust was born.

    February 1, 2012 at 8:09 pm

    • Allen Simmons (Lyrical Grim Reaper)

      Dope hotness!

      February 2, 2012 at 6:02 am

      • Thanks Allen. Glad you enjoyed it

        February 2, 2012 at 12:41 pm

    • Way to write it BP. I love the imagery on this one. Yes, Dopeness is right.


      February 2, 2012 at 12:05 pm

      • Thanks Lucky Lefty, You know I got to try to keep up with the people that surround me. All of you inspire me to be better.

        February 2, 2012 at 12:42 pm

    • The Failed Immortal

      this wad really good Phx details were legit

      February 2, 2012 at 8:27 pm

    • hamza


      February 2, 2012 at 11:53 pm

      • Hey When the dark calls, you have to cum……

        February 3, 2012 at 2:00 pm

  12. WOW! magnificent imagery here Phoenix. I felt I was there. Darkly HOT and very, very inviting.

    February 1, 2012 at 11:30 pm

    • Thanks Frankie. Reaching out to ymy darkside

      February 1, 2012 at 11:37 pm

  13. Forbidden Lust
    By David Cardenas

    It’s what I want, but can’t have
    It’s what in need that makes it so bad
    I am addicted to her smile, her touch
    Her body drives me wild her love, my lust

    How many kisses can I steal?
    Before my true intentions are revealed
    We caress, I press her flesh close to me
    Her breath on my neck is hot like it’s suppose to be

    No waiting or procrastinating it begins
    No love making, just sex, from my sexual sin
    Flex from within, but her hands are so soft
    I’m ready to blow off, but instead I hold off

    Spread her open like pages in playboy magazines
    Got me hallucinating like stages of mescaline
    Light her on fire like blazes of gasoline
    Eyes open baby , wait you don’t have to dream

    She screams my name and I’m brought back to reality
    We’re in the parking lot; another daydream casualty
    She said, “See you tomorrow”, so nonchalantly
    Licking her lips; moving in slow motion, taunting me

    I get in my car, drive off and see her in my rear view
    See, she wants me and my daydreams want her to
    But it will never happen and I really can’t fault her
    She 26 with an itch, but damn she’s still the bosses daughter

    February 2, 2012 at 2:27 pm


      February 2, 2012 at 3:50 pm

    • That ending is just off the chain David. Didn’t see it coming at all. Love, love, Loveeeeeeeeee this one.

      February 2, 2012 at 11:05 pm

    • hamza


      February 2, 2012 at 11:57 pm

      • Thanks brother and that is soooo true. lol

        February 2, 2012 at 11:59 pm

  14. I yearn for the sweet smells of a summer day,
    Where dew drops dance off of grass illuminated by the sun’s golden rays
    The precious sound of children running up and down the city streets
    Joggers running through the good ole park where pets and owners come to meet
    A place where summer time love flourishes on park side benches
    Bird feeders filled to the brim to feed the summer time finches
    Where I can relive the innocence of life, enjoying every intimate touch
    I remember carving names in the great oak tree with my first summer time crush.
    Basketball courts alive with action, “Pass, Pass, Yo! Shoot the ball”
    Hopping on bikes with my friends, “Hey, let’s see who can be first to get to the mall”
    We dance all day, discussed dreams until moonlight shined bright
    Sitting on designated porches until our parents called us in for the night
    Reminiscing off of how simple living was in the days of old
    My lust for that simple life keeps my warm heart from growing cold.

    February 2, 2012 at 3:49 pm

    • Simple pleasures are the best momories Phoenix. This is just so lovely, the picture you paint, a wonderful memory to have.

      February 2, 2012 at 11:45 pm

  15. The Failed Immortal

    Q or A?

    A slithering thought to divide
    Where questions and answers abide
    when faith become truth
    and is lost to the youth
    then knowledge is apple of eye

    February 2, 2012 at 7:53 pm

    • Short and very, very sweet. Love it TFM

      February 2, 2012 at 11:06 pm

    • hamza


      February 2, 2012 at 11:51 pm

    • I lovethe simplistic power of this Failed Immortal.

      February 3, 2012 at 2:01 pm

  16. hamza


    February 2, 2012 at 11:58 pm

  17. shantell cooper


    I come to Explain all my Womanly Features, Beauty so Profound I arouse all God’s Creatures… Since the very Beginning of Physical Time I was Created Perfectly all by Gods’ Design… The Simplest Pleasure given by Sight The Curve of my Body, As it glows in the Moonlight, Who can Resist the Curl of my Lips? “Strong infrastructure from the Roundness of my Hips” I can bring forth Life, through my body’s Canal, And watch it Grow from my Breast that Swell… “I Spin my Web from the Softest of Silk” “I’m trully a Woman I can produce my Own Milk”. The way I sway when I walk in a Room, leaves a Burning Desire for all to Consume… I’m well aware of my Body’s Decision, when I stare at myself Naked all I see is”FORBIDDEN”. Like The Story of Eve when she came to the Tree, “One Bite of the Apple and Knowledge came unto Me”. So upon my Eyes if you should Gaze, Should I grant you Entry? to my “FORBIDDEN WAY’S”. Do you have the Patiences to Discover and Wonder? All these Endowments that you can Lay up Under, or Would you Disengage Fall Back & Retreat? Scared to ExPlore & let Our Bodies Compete… Pick and Pivot as I spin and twirl Get Captured in the Moment as our Bodies Swirl… Well Kept Secrets Much Remains Hidden, My Mind is Open but my Body is “FORBIDDEN” Unless He holds a Magical Key, One that Unlatches the Artistry in Me… Truly in Raw Form, “I Possess pure Exquisiteness” God gave me the Mind of Einstein.. but The Body of Venus… From “The Seventh Wonders of the World” my Body holds a Genuine Pearl… But to Acquire, It Takes Skill and Ingenuity… Thoes are the only 2 Ways you can ever, ever get to Me… Total Domination Without Imposition, How long will I wait to Release what’s “FORBIDDEN”. I hold my Head high looking towards Zion thinking about Elysium & the promises of Canaan… A Place, of Orphic Exhilaration! Yet I’m known as Man’s first & last Temptation… Leading to a Intricate Paradox, What’s “FORBIDDEN” is found in and outside the Box.. I’m Totally & Absolutely at Peace, My Body is every bit in Tuned with me, “I’m Relishing in all my Glory” The Curves on my Body Tells my Life Story… So can you Convey, And hold true to your Mission? Or will all this be in Vain and Remain “FORBIDDEN”.

    February 3, 2012 at 4:39 pm

    • Very powerful Shantell, you did your damn thing on this joint. You put so much in this my mind was fried, I had to reboot it. lol. Honestly, I loved it.


      February 4, 2012 at 9:22 am

    • Absolutely brilliant write Shantell. You portray women as the godess’s they are. Magnificent!

      February 4, 2012 at 11:54 am

  18. Put your tongue in my mouth

    Make me wet

    Run your hands down my back

    Grab my ass

    Lay me down..

    Spread my legs


    Tell me…

    What’s it like

    Inside me?…

    You’re so hard….


    So warm baby…

    So deep…

    Let me hold you closer.

    I won’t let go.

    Let me stroke you with my warmth…

    Make you cum…

    Does it feel good?

    Can you feel my sadness?

    Can you feel…

    The forbidden lust

    That pushes you into a crescendo.

    Intensified by my soft whimpers.

    Kissing beads of sweat along your brow alone

    Brings about seismic shivers from deep within…

    I can’t get enough…

    With bodies pressed

    Thick shaft stretching my walls

    My mind and my body calls for you to be my guilty pleasure…

    Again…and again…

    I don’t want this thing cuz I’m hooked…

    But I can’t let go.

    You’re arms they sooth me.

    I feel myself gettin dickmatized!

    Shit…This mutha fucka got me cookin’ biscuits for breakfast.

    So warm…


    Got me…

    Penciling in frequent late night booty calls on my mental calendar

    over your diamond chip dick…

    Continuously you do all the right things

    I try to keep it in tact…

    But I’m effortlessly slipping in the cracks

    Falling into your bed

    drenched in sweat stains on Egyptian cotton sheets.

    Damn…I’m so gone…

    February 5, 2012 at 10:06 am

    • You got me “dickmatized”. Damn, I love this joint. Thanks for coming through. Very hot Jinga, veeeery hot.


      February 5, 2012 at 1:12 pm

      • Thank you David!. ..Great subject and I love the new place. You did an amazing job 🙂

        February 5, 2012 at 4:04 pm

  19. Queenschan

    I hope it’s ok for me to our another piece up. No quickie this time

    February 6, 2012 at 7:15 am

    • We always have time for you and your work.


      February 6, 2012 at 2:56 pm

      • Queenschan

        Well I’m going to do it again

        February 6, 2012 at 4:08 pm

  20. Queenschan

    Head Game

    I’m staring at you hungrily ready for the bell to ring…I have every intention of keeping my title DING DING
    I start off slowly sucking the tip
    Slide my tongue in your hole so you can skeet a little bit.
    Lollipop is what I see so I take my time and lick strokes so slick feels like you’re teasing my clit
    My head game is trophies for this shit
    Foreplay is done let the game begin…. head now bobbing up fast, down slow don’t tell me to stop remember you said you would be ready for this. Left nut right nut massage with thick lips…now I swallow your dick with extreme prejudice. Mouth so deep warm and juicy my motion makes you feel like you’re deep in the pussy. That’s it daddy grab my hair just like that…tell mommy how you love my. deep throat don’t you worry I won’t choke
    Jaws squeezing, lips pleasing tongue teasing every inch…hair grips tighter…head bobs faster….want to feel in my throat the force of your sweet dick spit… say my name that’s right enjoy all of it…..I feel it baby you’re getting ready to cum….dick all the way in touching the tip of my throat I make a deep vibrational hummmm……..that’s it spit that shit… strong and sweet. The smile on your face speaks HEAD GAME COMPLETE

    February 6, 2012 at 6:15 pm

    • Very hot and sensual Queen


      February 6, 2012 at 7:56 pm

      • Queenschan

        Thanks David. Still trying to find a comfortable position with erotic pieces. Thanks for the opportunity to embark on this journey here on the LAB

        February 6, 2012 at 8:49 pm

  21. The Failed Immortal

    Q or A?

    He said we shouldnt touch why cant she understand
    that even a bit a of knowledge will unravel the plan
    Who is she talking to speaking in hushed tones
    it cant be anybody in this garden were alone
    My love for her intigues me my choices become blurs
    As she places it in my hand i ask”Questions or Answers?”

    February 7, 2012 at 12:22 am

    • Nicely done. I digs it. Once


      February 7, 2012 at 12:52 am

    • Queenschan

      Wow. I’m intrigued.

      February 7, 2012 at 3:31 am

  22. The Failed Immortal

    Q or A?

    Questions or Answers?
    A thought dances blissfully in my mind like the cool breeze through a meadow
    A presense approaches that send a tinge of fear slowly creeping up my spine
    For when it speaks its voice carries a velvet infatuation caressing my deepest desires
    I am entranced by its words and drawn in its echoes
    its promise to mirror Him collapses my last hint of doubt
    As i place it in his hand
    unknowingly perfections destruction

    February 7, 2012 at 12:36 am

    • and Now I digs it twice.


      February 7, 2012 at 12:52 am

    • Queenschan

      Now I really want to know

      February 7, 2012 at 3:33 am

  23. The Failed Immortal

    Q or A?

    like moths to the flame
    Just one to undo his word
    So close, incredible

    February 11, 2012 at 9:16 pm

  24. allen simmons

    I’ve dream of us being a connection, of lust, sex, and flesh, I can almost see the underwear, beneath your dress,I must you your just due, I’m impressed, As I envision our forbidden lovefest. I let my thoughts run wild and free, because your sexiness takes a hold of me,With just one kiss, fantasy becomes reality,I devour your sweet taste, in elevated haste, my erection fills with its thick paste, but with intense concentration, I make haste, to enjoy our unapproved interlude, so we won’t waste, This time that presented us with this moment, here that we share, as I make passionate love to you, and I massage your hair. What I feel next, is very complex, the fact that I’m stroking this married woman, giving me great sex, Guilt taps my shoulder, but I shake it off, I only want you, sexy and soft. You are amazing at this lovesex feast, a Sexual beast, between the sheets,No inhibitions held as our bodies collide,none in me either, as I pour inside, of you, all of the fire, that been contained, but at the moment of truth, unleashed and full accepted, unrestrained,If only for this once in a lifetimes chance, my love I thank you, for this forbidden dance!

    March 3, 2012 at 3:31 pm

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