The Lyrical Assassins Brotherhood Poetry

Magnetic Words

Well, Here we gooooo!
This topic is Magnetic Words. As poets, we want our words to attach to peoples souls, simply because it came from out soul. Our featured poet is none other then Black Phoenix. BP is the Editor In Chief of the LAB Underground. His writing is a reflection of his soul. It is creative, unique, and deep. Please show him some love with you poems and your comments. Remember, this page only works because of you.

Happy writing

David Cardenas
Editor In Chief of the LAB
Administrator of The LAB Poetry

44 responses

  1. poetically captured

    lmfao.. I LOVE IT EMO!! WOO WOO!! …Magnetic words? …diggggggggggggggggggggin it!!! “I live life metaphorically” ..u aint never said it better..

    July 19, 2011 at 7:06 am

    • blackphoenix75

      THANK YOU THANK YOPU EMA BEMA!! CAN’T wait to see ya drop!!

      July 19, 2011 at 11:48 am

      • This piece had me memorized. You took me to the sea and left me sinking. Awesome write BP. You are so good at being good.

        David

        July 19, 2011 at 12:11 pm

      • hamza

        YO SAHAAB, AS I READ THIS, A SMILE GREW LARGER N LARGER. THIS WAS PLEASENT AND WITTY. GREAT PEN.

        July 21, 2011 at 2:07 am

  2. poetically captured

    My brains tragically chaotic
    I blurt magnetic words
    Call me verbal static
    Like a whore on her knees
    I stick to heads
    And like life to death
    I swallow the dead
    I’m beyond poetic
    I dig up the truth and have these imbeciles calling me prophetic
    I don’t write to be a common American slave
    And I don’t need to follow chained ways
    When my faith and heart is all I need to be saved
    Don’t pay me for what I have inside of me
    Do me like a lover
    Read, use, and listen to what’s inside of me
    I’m aged beyond my years
    I can see every day that passes inside of my tears
    So I spit magnetic words
    To rain on a desert
    To be the calmness in the disturbed
    To be the persistent smile in hurts
    To simply be the heard in silence and still be there afterwards..

    July 19, 2011 at 9:50 am

    • Wow Roxy, that one left me in awe. So many tight lines. I am so impressed every time I read your work.

      Bravo!!!

      David

      July 19, 2011 at 10:29 am

      • awww shucks…..lol..thank ya

        July 19, 2011 at 12:16 pm

    • blackphoenix75

      YI just had a frightening vision of a man walking around with a prostitute stuck in his zipper!! I love this piece Ema Bema!!

      July 19, 2011 at 12:05 pm

      • lmfao.. my poor emo aint got no sense ..geez ..altho the image is fukin hilarious lmao..

        July 19, 2011 at 12:17 pm

    • Yes my dear you are beyond poetic! Hotness..

      July 19, 2011 at 12:33 pm

    • hamza

      WOW P.C. ,I NEVER REALLY GET TO READ YOU MUCH, BUT WHEN I DO YOU NEVER DISAPPOINT. CHEERS!!! TO GETTING TO KNOW YOUR RANGE OF TALENT 🙂

      July 21, 2011 at 2:10 am

  3. I can’t think of anything more powerful than man mixed with magnetic words.. diggin this BP!

    ~Poetic Ray~

    July 19, 2011 at 12:31 pm

    • blackphoenix75

      the honor is all mines. it lovrely to see you here

      July 19, 2011 at 1:31 pm

  4. Magnetic words stick to my guts
    And…Pragmatic verbs run amuck
    While…Asthmatic slurs don’t give a fuck
    As…Fantastic purrs arouse man and mutt
    I can’t help myself, I’ve come undone
    I am the antecedent of the sun
    …So says the Rays that light me
    …So says the pen that writes me
    Seasoned are my gluttonous chews
    Still misconstrued be my spews
    But I upchuck my deuce
    Because I’m sure I’ve paid my dues to the confused
    Who are determined to beat upon my back
    I burp and only formulated alphabets slip through my cracks
    My subject-verb agreement
    Have relations that be vehement
    So they consummate and leave behind seeds to be birthed
    Meaning my inner walls are aligned with magnetic words

    *Poetic Ray..Wurd Glutton*

    July 19, 2011 at 1:10 pm

    • snap, snap, snap. That was hot. You really brought out your A game on this one. Phenomenal and so well constructed. I’m speechless on the talent at hand.

      David

      July 19, 2011 at 1:23 pm

    • Isn’t she AMAZING!!!!!!

      July 19, 2011 at 1:27 pm

    • blackphoenix75

      And you asked us to lower our standards for What reason?.. I think I need to step my game up! Love this piece Fire Ray!!

      July 19, 2011 at 1:32 pm

      • thanx guys! and umm yeah I asked that lol I’ve been stuck lately 🙂

        July 19, 2011 at 1:43 pm

    • hamza

      NICE WORK POETIC RAY….GOOD TO READ U AGAIN

      July 21, 2011 at 2:12 am

      • thanx and likewise hamza 🙂

        July 21, 2011 at 4:42 am

    • This is an amazing write Poetic Ray, just love these lines.

      ‘I burp and only formulated alphabets slip through my cracks
      My subject-verb agreement
      Have relations that be vehement
      So they consummate and leave behind seeds to be birthed
      Meaning my inner walls are aligned with magnetic words’

      July 22, 2011 at 1:04 am

  5. I absolutely love this challenge and both of your pieces bp and poetically captured ! I will be back definitely

    July 19, 2011 at 1:10 pm

    • blackphoenix75

      Oh and we love you Mizzfab!! Can’t wait to see your heat!

      July 19, 2011 at 1:33 pm

  6. Words Magnetic
    By D-Cipher

    Words magnetic constantly attracting
    Unheard phonetics bomb and attacking
    Before I said it, the source starts tracking
    So I start cracking before they start hacking
    Aimed at my soul, every word starts attaching
    Culminated flow, nouns and verbs start stacking
    Calms as I go, I formulate what the heart is lacking
    And my emotions show what the stars are grasping
    I just want my words to reach your soul and stick
    While metallic metaphors take their shoes off and sit
    I’m cracking metal doors every time I choose to spit
    See, I know I was meant for more, poetically, this is it
    My heart skips [beats], do me a favor and hold your lips
    My poetry’s in motion, even with mouth closed I’m sick
    The main attraction, the freak show, and no I won’t quit
    As my acrobatic adjective jump, roll and flip
    Leaving you mesmerized at the danger of all of this
    Magnetized as my words squeezes back and empties a clip
    Penetrating your existence as I give your soul a kiss
    And you and I are finally connected by my words so magnetic

    July 20, 2011 at 4:35 am

    • hamza

      MAAAAAN I AINT SAYIN IT…..U KNOW IT’S HOT (EVEN WITH MOUTH CLOSED I’M SICK) YOU A BEAST BABY. A FEW HOT QUOTES

      July 21, 2011 at 2:15 am

      • hamza

        GREAT WORK DAVE…

        July 21, 2011 at 2:16 am

    • blackphoenix75

      CIPH DAWG!! You flaming hot wit this one

      July 21, 2011 at 4:55 pm

  7. wow everyone is bringing it lemmie see if i can freewrite something here lol

    Magnetic words
    Mizz Fab

    Words stick like refrigerator magnets
    Cling to our chest
    As if our heart is composed of metal
    We take words flung at us
    Like your good for nothing
    Your a slut
    A bitch
    You should just kill your self
    Your a whore
    Your a player
    You should just give it up
    And we place that label on our soul
    Turning beautiful creations of God
    Into monsters manipulated and mutated by man
    We become addicted to magnetic words
    Drawn to the agony
    The defeat
    We push people down
    Wrecking each others self esteem
    We even fling more words back at them
    In defense
    Making ourselves feel better
    Backed against the wall
    Ya we are fully loaded with words
    And each one has a way of piercing our flesh
    Like shards of glass
    We fling words at people out of reach
    Like God and the president and that man who did us wrong
    Ten years ago
    Scream them hoping they stick
    Hoping someone here’s us
    Attempting to get vengeance on the world
    Yet those words fall to the ground
    Unable to stick to anything
    Sometimes we wish we where magicians
    So we can change our labels
    Take ugly turn into beautiful
    Turn stupid into intelligent
    And turn depressed into happy
    Maybe one day we will learn use words
    To spread peace
    Stop hoarding the bad one
    Throwing em at people
    And really think before we speak
    Maybe one day we will wake up
    throw the magnets off
    Breath in our own presence
    and breath out all negativity
    and move on with our lives …….

    July 20, 2011 at 6:38 pm

    • I love where you started from and where you took it. Your such a militant. lol. Great write filled with hope.

      David

      July 20, 2011 at 11:29 pm

    • hamza

      DEEP ISH…NICE WORK….I’MA FAN TOO 🙂

      July 21, 2011 at 2:17 am

    • blackphoenix75

      YOU BROUGHT IT AND YOU BROUGHT IT WITH A FLAMING PEN!! BURN MIZ FAB BURN!

      July 21, 2011 at 4:56 pm

  8. hamza

    ~ MAGNETIC WORDZ ~
    Sometimes, it’s better to join the team you can’t defeat
    Say please, as you plead, for a change in your needs
    Found peace in punishment, found war in compromise
    Pain is pure, cross-fingered agreements, I laugh at lies
    I wonder, who sends the monsters to come after me
    Why do hero’s arrive near the brink of catastrophe
    I’ll slay thee monsters, by just cause that’s morally credited
    A predator to thy sender, a painful end with mercy edited
    I read books that’s prophetic, so my wordz are magnetic
    My soldiers crave the message, anytime I address it
    They pay me close attention like a pretty woman undressin’
    I march at dawn, as some die before the sun sets
    Victory wasn’t meant for this battle, but it’s not over yet
    There’s no greater weapon than a prepared mind
    Within the shadow of the plans, begins a move so sinister
    No doubt in my mind, my enemy will fall in due time
    He forgot, some warriors are to dangerous to be prisoner
    With cross-fingered agreements, I gained their trust
    Kept my plans steady, all emotions were a hush
    Years pass, at last, we strike as armed snakes in the grass
    Fell from within like Rome, claim this land as our new home
    The use of patients, made the art of war look very weak
    Sometimes, it’s better to join the team you can’t defeat
    By….HAMZA

    July 21, 2011 at 2:03 am

    • This is soooo deep Hamza. I am truly impressed. That my friend is the WOW factor.

      Excellently done.

      D

      July 21, 2011 at 6:23 am

    • blackphoenix75

      Hamza, its been a murder in here and you just did it!! Gukity.. I love this joint

      July 21, 2011 at 4:58 pm

    • Such stregnth in this INK my Knight, just love the references you make to Rome and warriors. Great visuals and this line stood out to me

      ‘my enemy will fall in due time
      He forgot, some warriors are to dangerous to be prisoner’ and this one . ‘They pay me close attention like a pretty woman undressin’

      So many great lines. A brilliant write.

      July 22, 2011 at 12:57 am

  9. A fantastic write and you always amuze with your funny little asides you throw into your writes like the Walmart reference. Love it Phoenix.

    July 21, 2011 at 12:27 pm

    • blackphoenix75

      Thank you much your Majesty!! I am honored your came by.

      July 21, 2011 at 4:59 pm

  10. Magnetic Words

    When I see spread out before me
    words in script across a page
    They take on strong personalities
    from meek to wild to rage

    If I don’t have another thing
    to lift my spirits high
    Down on my luck and miserable
    bite my lips so I don’t cry

    My pen appears to sense my grief
    expressive scribbles start to show
    Magnetic words all band together
    soaring me to high from low

    Ink consummates with potent vibes
    wowing every syllable
    Magnetic words the longed for brainchild
    given birth by ink and quill

    Frankie.

    July 21, 2011 at 12:50 pm

    • This just felt right. I love the feeling your piece gave me. “My pen appears to sense my grief/ expressive scribbles start to show/ Magnetic words all band together/ soaring me to high from low”. Magnificent.

      David

      July 21, 2011 at 2:40 pm

      • Thanks David, it was a bit of a rush job, but I was happy with it.

        July 22, 2011 at 12:48 am

    • blackphoenix75

      “Ink consummates with potent vibes /wowing every syllable/ Magnetic words the longed for brainchild given birth by ink and quill”

      I love the birth of this Line!! The QUEEN HAS SPOKEN!!

      July 21, 2011 at 5:01 pm

      • Thanks so much Phoenix, so glad you like that bit, I love it too.

        July 22, 2011 at 12:49 am

  11. Hamza ty for sharing that piece i really loved it . great job

    July 21, 2011 at 12:52 pm

  12. Great piece BP & to all the pieces that followed BRAVO….loved them all

    MAGNETIC WORDS

    ——————————————————————————————
    Striking the paper with the phenomenal written thought
    Burning the grain as it etches out whats been caught
    Surging down my pen as it is vigorously written
    Attracted by the frequencies provoke you to be smitten
    Producing metaphors that offers a reflux not yet printed
    Charging your emotions with the linguistically indented
    Causing your physical to react as it is unlimited
    Compulsively bellowing true affirmations of whats intended
    As the charm is unforced as it churns & spits
    The ink that drops Is complicated & just won’t quit

    October 25, 2011 at 11:14 am

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